2010-02-12

a room filled up with mosquitoes by falseeeyelashes (R)

Fandom Category: Community
Pairing: Britta Perry/Jeff Winger
Fic Title: a room filled up with mosquitoes
Author: [Bad username or site: @ livejournal.com]
Link: http://falseeeyelashes.livejournal.com/264751.html
Rating/Warning(s): R / spoilers up to 1.09 Debate 109
Genre: Post-Episode, Comedy, Romance
WIP?: No

Why This Must Be Read: Because this author has Britta's inner voice nailed down; finding the voice of the characters is such an important thing in fanfiction (it can pretty much make or brake your first person narrative), and [Bad username or site: @ livejournal.com] does such a good job with her diction and style choices to make sure that the dialogue (and Britta's inner monologues) sound like something fans would hear on the show.

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